Comments for Classmates: Object Writing

Hey Madison, this piece was very intriguing and interesting to read. I really like how you connected it to something very real and personal! The twist was definitely something unexpected but it made it very interesting to read.


Hey Bailey, I loved how descriptive you made this piece, I could picture it exactly how you were describing it as I was reading it. I love the ending to this, it was different than how I was expecting it to end. I feel like we normally expect stories to end with the perfect and right ending and I like how this story did not conform to that!

Hey Lyss, I love how you tied this story to your own personal experiences! It made the story so much more personal and easy to imagine as I was reading!

Love the Bible verses and quotes at the end, very inspiring!


I completely agree with the mouth full of words and uncontrollable laughter, I am the same way!


I love how you talked about how you are ever-changing! Very true, because we are always changing and growing up!